Zoe's First Narrative

On Saturday, Zoe had a busy day. It was my dad’s birthday, and there was a family get-together planned at a park in Corvallis. She spent the morning with me while Annie ran errands. Then her cousin Leilani came by with Ryan and Dad to pick up Sean. She was really excited to see Leilani. After Annie got back, we got in the car, and she took a nap on the way to the park, and then played with her older cousins all afternoon. When we got home, she kicked a ball around the backyard with me and Sean before bedtime.

Frequently, while she slowly drifts off to sleep, she will go over her vocabulary. She’ll repeat words she knows or has just learned over and over again, almost chanting to herself. Annie’s gotten used to a bit of random chatter at bedtime, so she didn’t think much about it when Zoe started talking during bedtime that night.

“Papa, Papa?” she said, and Annie nodded and said “Yes, Papa just said night-night to you.” Zoe smiled and went back to nursing.

A minute later she popped back up. “’Lani! ’Lani ’Lani?” Annie said “Yes, we saw Leilani today.”

“Grampa? Ryno?” Zoe continued. “Yes, Grandpa and Uncle Ryan, too.”

Satisfied, Zoe returned to nursing. As she got more sleepy, she talked about the Car (beep-beep!) and Going, and each time Annie smiled and said Yes, and got her to focus on the task at hand again.

But after that, when Zoe started talking about the Ball! and Kicking! and Sean and night-night, Annie realized that she had just recapped her entire day.

Maybe it was just a fluke. As I said, she likes to practice her vocabulary when she’s sleepy, and those are most of the words she knows — but she covered all the major events of the day in chronological order, and I’m inclined to think that she was telling her Momma all about her big day.

Detroit Diesel Redesign

Detroit Diesel 2008 Redesign

About a month ago, we launched the new Detroit Diesel redesign. We were working on this site when I was first hired at Pop Art, and while I’m proud of the code we wrote the first time, our standards have evolved a bit over time. The opportunity to revisit the site and kick it up a notch was very exciting.

The design team and I worked closely on a bottom-up approach, where we put a lot of effort into the templates and underlying grid structure for all pages. By focusing on these aspects of the site first, rather than designing the landing pages and then interpreting those designs for all the other pages, I think we got a more coherent look to the site. Plus, the grid that was built into the pages made it extremely simple to float photos and charts into pages without having to write complicated page-specific CSS.

In addition, our copywriters rewrote all the content on the site to better match the brand’s tone of voice. Combined with the new black-and-chrome color scheme and prevalent use of large images, and I think the new site really packs a punch.

Note: This was originally posted on my work blog, and I’m re-posting it here for archival purposes.

Batman: Gotham Knight: One Paragraph Review

Batman: Gotham Knight

How about a one-word review? Disappointing. The summary says “Batman takes on Deadshot, Killer Croc and other deadly foes in six anime-inspired short films.” The key words there are anime-inspired. This movie desperately wanted to beThe Animatrix, but it failed because they got American writers and animators. The six shorts all have different styles, but none of them are interesting, because they’re all direct imitations of the art styles fromthe Animatrix. There’s some potential here, especially the story about Bruce training to resist pain in India, but ultimately the delivery flops.